In a few nations, there is an increase in the average weight of people and the decrease in health and fitness level. Further, the reasons and solutions are yet to be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, the fast-food seems to be the foremost cause of this issue as people are likely to eat this food instead of homemade food in their daily routine, it is clear that most of the fast-food items contain excessive sugar and fat, which increase the weight of the body. Secondly, the sedentary lifestyle may have a link with this problem because some people have no time for exercises, and it might be a reason for health issues especially obesity.
The first and foremost solution is people should avoid the fast food, which contains high cholesterol ingredients, is likely to create different health problems; hence, they must add the green vegetables and fruits in their daily diet to fulfil the value of high nutritious vitamins and minerals. Besides, people have to adopt the habit of doing the exercises to burn their calories, which can be helpful to make them fit and active.
In conclusion, though increasing weight is not a big issue in this busy world, yet people should be aware of their health; consequently, they should manage their diet and exercise properly for tackling this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e helpful to make them fit and active. In conclusion, though increasing weight ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92342342342 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53105458621 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9318944255 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.142857143 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267446460522 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136131329196 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09134151168 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175860491542 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510883124714 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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