The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of female employees in three job sectors in Greece from 1990 to 2015.

The column chart demonstrates the proportion of female employees who worked in three job sectors between 1990 and 2015.

It can be clearly observed that during 2005, 2010, and 2015, the female employees in the call center of Greece were higher as compared to other years. Coming to the Banking and finance section, only the year 2015 had the highest number of female employees, accounting for 35 %, while in the rest of the years, the females were below 20%.

Turning to the customer service sector, in the starting years 1990, 1995, and 2000, women were noticed around 13%, and thereafter, they escalated to 20% in the year 2005. Eventually, in 2010 and 2015, the women employees exhibited a rapid escalation in the percentage, which accounted for 28% and 50% respectively.

Overall, having taken an overview of the above-mentioned information, it is crystal clear that the maximum employed females were found in the last three years than the first three years.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06875 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62545636082 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2074368738 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314559211848 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15721593689 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123314138853 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201162626232 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134386305317 0.0819641961636 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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