Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?
Housing and number of accommoditons are becoming a signaficant issue in majority of countries around the globe. This essay will examine a important factors that have collaborated to this problem and decline the number of homeless humans situation.
First of all, most people are suffering from finding home also this issue influences to live in poverty. I strongly feel that, goverment have to solve effectively in all regions. Why? Becouse number of immigrants move to other country's accomaditions by many reasons. It will cause boost urban population numbers and insufficient housing problems. As a result of this kind of situation come to increase in both progression. Firstly,congestion area and undevelopment convenient condition to inhabitants to find accomadition. To solve this issue, a variety of goverment assotciations should create inner city to avoid homeless people. Nowadays, most development of countries are achieve the highest income by typical industrial facilities. This services are possessing human's destinations. To do this,
goverment tend to reduce industrial percents. By this way, they can avoid much more problems within poverty, unemployment. For instance,
The goverment of China could avoid the proportion of chineese poverty. First of all, they broke down the lack of ancient places and completed a part of inner residents to dwellers also incomers to live definely. Moreover, China 's assotciation could private compatetive contents. Today,range of people are working to development of the economy by building places to homeless people.
In conclusion,majority of goverment may see their liability realible, at that time ,all of the problems will solve effectively and quality of life will be much more favourable. I convince that, consequences of homeless people decline over the year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61956521739 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25454096026 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.47236612 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6315789474 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246853037687 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674424481704 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634653062903 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144180867998 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979462689768 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.