Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays , many people are migrating to big cities and it leads to housing shortage which has become one of the most serious issue of the society. Although some people think that this can only solved by governments, I believe companies as well as individuals could help to change this status quo.
To begin with, governments with authorities have the capacity to tackle housing crisis by taking various measures. Firstly , governments could restrict building landed houses and encourage people to live in apartments which would help big cities to deal with space shortage that are caused by increasing number of immigrants. For example, in 2010, Ha Noi has built thousands of low price high-rise apartments in order to meet the large demand of residents. In addition , governments could control the number of people immigrating into center cities by setting up the laws which is barriers to entry, therefore , decreasing the need for housing.
In contrast, despite of the limit of power, there are several things that companies and individuals themselves can do to make positive effects in solving housing shortage. Firstly, companies could invest to small towns by building factories and offices there , thereby , giving more job opportunities for local residents, so they can work at their hometown and do not have to move to big cities . Secondly,individuals could make changes by choosing to live in suburbs which are far away from the center and commuting by public transportations, thus, reducing population density in center cities and dealing with space shortage problem.
In conclusion, the last decade has witnessed a significant population growth in big cities in the world which leads to housing shortage problem , a major concern of governments and society. From the reasons given above, I strongly believe that if government and citizens as well as corporations work together , this issue would be completely solved
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29738562092 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91828062461 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5325753829 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.363636364 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303930477023 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110497979311 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655633699768 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188314365327 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583781346765 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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