How can individuals contribute to protecting the environment?
There are two ways an individual can contribute in regards with protecting the environment.
Initially, sustaining and saving energy is one of the most successful ways to protect the environment in our plane since if people use energy without sustaining, the energy will destroy some of the environment. According to some of the researchers from Oxford University claim that approximately 70 percent of energy published new gases and some dangerous substance in the air and the energy which can destroy the environment people use it a lot. Hence, the energy is widespread pollution in the air and destroyed people environment. people have to concentrate on how to use it without consuming. To exemplify, in the USA the government attempts to awareness from consumption the energy in order not to widespread the dangerous substance.
Secondly, reducing the smoking of the factors are a way to protect the environment due to the fact that the factory’s smoking will kill all world life because of Acid substance are included in the smoking. A government which has to put rigid law to enforce some of the manufactures to change the smoking by ones are more sustainable people environments. Therefore, there are many steps to enforce industrials stop smoking.
In short, sustaining energy and reducing the factory’s smoking are the way that has to use it to protect our environment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13656255977 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6845876253 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210193313551 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840833147592 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102573000669 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163722488042 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114235740431 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.