A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self- study basis
rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher,
students often find it difficult to manage their studies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Qudrat Abdullayev:
Qudrat Abdullayev:
It is true that nowadays increasing number of students are altering courses which are intended to self study basis rather than attending a formal classes because of possible privileges that online courses are providing.While some people hold the conservative view that learning English effectively would be far fetched idea without the assistance of teachers. I believe that self study is useful in some cases,but,I completely agree that teacher involvement and studying in classroom is vitally integral in the learning process of English.
On the one hand ,self study is beneficial for some people to some extent. For working class students ,it would be the most salient and convenient way of learning.The reason behind this is that, self study is flexible for these people because the time they spend for learning a foreign language is limited as well as uncertain to set. That is why ,more and more people are becoming inclined to self study by the aid of online courses, as they provide opportunities like flexible time of studying,setting the schedules and classes according to the students options. Apart from that,self studying might be more plausible for some people particularly who live in remote places,suburbs or country sides . Admittedly, it is mere way for them to learn inexpensive costs,without much effort, and comfortable conditions.
On the other hand, teacher endorsement and classroom teaching method Is also important. Because,qualifued teachers provide high quality education,create supportive, stimulative atmosphere and teacher is mere providing relevant knowledge and fullfilling the gaps, needs of students for knowledge . Therefore we can easily consider that teacher's aid is the core of studying progress. Unfortunately,online courses are not able to create such kind of privileges,so , self study students might be more likely to face barriers in their studies as result of the lack of teacher
endorsement.
By the way of conclusion, I accept that self studying and online courses are beneficial and prospectous, however, study progress and effectiveness would be impossible to achieve without the aid of teachers.So I agree that academic courses is only way of eschewing inefficient study process, as well as achieving progress
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, kind of, as well as, by the way, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23550281664 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2660655111 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337741827614 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12732668665 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075643415275 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225663026234 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729202851864 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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