Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies .Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that scientific research is imperative for the development of the country. But ,it remains an argument whether research should be conducted by government or private companies. I believe that the involvement of private companies towards the process of carrying out researches would be useful in some cases,however, I completely agree that it should be conducted by government and there is mere way of achieving tangible results.
To some extent,it is impossible to deny Corporations aid ,because they are necessary as well as cumulative part of research field .The main reason behind this is that they cover up research which is not carried out by government. As the scope of research area is huge ,it is impossible to fulfill the gaps through only authorities ,therefore,tackling this problem by private companies would be a step in the right direction .
However , the credibility gap between the above mentioned advantages and their actions ,sometimes differentiates immensely. Because there might be one danger which is concerned in the work of private companies. Most people allege that such kind of companies' researches are not people oriented and they do things only for monetary gains,so they might manipulate results in order to maximise their profits. There are numerous scandals as a result of being introduced hurriedly after inadequate trials . The drug "thalidomide" is an epitome example to this . At that time, this drug it induced the birth of thousands of malformed children. Therefore,people hold the conservative view to the research which is carried out by corporations.
From my perspective,authorities should have an upper hand in undertaking research. Because government-run projects are based on transparency and opennes and the motive behind is people-driven. Apart from that, such kind of researches are designed to benefit to society ,not to break into new market or to gain a competitive edge . Hence,government should be incumbent on administering research and it is more plausible and credible.
In conclusion,I appreciate the role of private companies ,but , I completely agree that giving the responsibility of conducting research to government Is a salient way of eschewing from making possible faults and achieving progressive results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52833877273 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0963842309 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.882352941 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337465106225 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100362695564 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831096271674 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190342277833 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925537923766 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.