Humans tend to copy one another, especially in fashion, choice of clothes and consumer goods. Do you agree or disagree? Provide your view and examples from your own experience.
It is widely believed that human beings tend to imitate each other, particularly in fashion, choice of clothes and consumer merchandises. I completely agree with the idea and this essay will discuss the four reasons why people are copying with relevant examples.
Firstly, the mere exposure effect owing to the repeated seductive advertising is one of the paramount determinant of mimicking. Seemingly, when folks are exposed to something that can invariably necessitate them to act in a positive way instantly. For illustration, there were all seven employees wearing converse in the office. So my uncle also ended up purchasing and wearing the identical outfit. Secondly, it could be an emotional aetiology, which means that the things we were exposed to as a child are going to have a crucial repercussion because they are more available in our mind. Take Ayusi as an example. The young cousin has been constantly gravitated towards the orange jewellery which was worn by her mother regularly. Therefore, it is unsurprising that the people we grew up with, affect our choices just as they influence our mannerisms, behaviour, and personality.
Thirdly, self esteem plays a significant role. In other words, if something suits our body shape, then we are more likely to incline towards it. This can be exemplified by the fact that my best mate Alex always prefers jeans which are similar to those of Axis band members since he feels incredibly comfortable in them. But provided that Alex is not confident, and finds dressing really stressful, then he will either opt out and wear other stuffs. Last but not least, consumers usually show greater recall of products that have been endorsed by celebrities regardless of whether they are actual fans or not. Cristiano Ronaldo, a prolific football player of this generation, would be an ideal reference. People in my society are oftentimes having energy drinks which was promoted by the superstar. Subconsciously, they believe that taking alike refreshments will associate the celebrities’ success, athletic skill and so on.
In conclusion, with the consideration of tempting promotion, feelings, self satisfaction and charismatic personality, people lean to simulate one another in the fashion, dress and customer goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... can invariably necessitate them to act in a positive way instantly. For illustration, there were...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3296398892 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97285029471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664819944598 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.923819723 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.263157895 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834007555767 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223159946441 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454926586622 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694112367611 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607446180552 0.056905535591 107% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
drinks which was promoted by the superstar.
drinks which were promoted by the superstar.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 361 350
No. of Characters: 1859 1500
No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.359 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.15 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.255 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.25 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.428 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5