If a five years old commits a crime. Should his /her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is a age of child when parents no longer have responsibility of a children's behavior.
Commiting crimes is a bad evil in the society which is increasing day by day. It is a controversial question about responsibility and punishment of guardians whose children commit crimes. According to my perception 18 years is a legal age when children are accountable for their actions and parent's have no responsibility.
On the one hand, for commiting crimes by young ones, parents are responsible due to numerous reasons. Firstly, in today's contemporary era children are developing in stressful and compitive world.moreover, indulging in illegal activities is a big cause of unawareness about what is right and wrong for them. Thus,it is fundamental duty of parents to impart moral values to their offsprings for their holistic development which would result in growing as responsible citizens. Secondly, both parents are working due to equality of males and females which may bring communion gap as after working hours they feel tire and do not spend time with their pupils. What is more, children find no time to share their problems with their parents which ultimately allow children to become offenders. Finally, for being rich parents force them to indulge in criminal activities :however, children are not real culprit and they have to follow their parents . To elaborate it, they are not only innocent but also have lack of guidance.
On the other hand, after reaching legal age which is 18 in most of nations, children should be accountable for their own actions. First of all, being a adult children get all rights such as voting, driving license, against exploitation etcetera. Thus ,children have all right to live with freedom then he should also be responsible for illegal activities by them such as theft and murders ,breaking laws or other unwanted actions. Besides this, children become aware about rules and regulations and other Norms as well as how to treat people in community. Consequently, committing crimes by children as a adult should be tackled and punished properly. Additionally, even though parents have responsibility of their pupils ever; whereas, after gaining maturity children are accountable for their own actions as they become able to judge what is right by wrong.
To conclude, although parents are responsible for crimes committed by their children yet I believe that the accountability of caretakers should be limited up-to legal age of their children despite of factors such as nurture and unawareness .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, whereas, such as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24936386768 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89800333499 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531806615776 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0355089304 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.352941176 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9411764706 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328016405333 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120131893204 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633667470652 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23349730586 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116547091616 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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