If a product is good or it meets people needs, people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment to what exnted do you agree or disagree?
The first car appeared on british roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as 29 million vehicles on british roads.
alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(public transport/bicycle/animals)
(international laws and control)
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Introduction:
Technology has complemented engineering in the field of automobile and from wheel we have achieved 4 wheels. 1888 was the year to witness automobiles on the streets of uk and the number has reached 29 million by 2000. Substitute to these cars is cardinal and to manage the car purchase they must impose international acts. this essay will argue on the above said statement by presenting reasons and examples.
Transportation is pivotal to commute and move things from one place to another. I partially agree with the given statement that alternative forms of transport should be introduced to control cars purchase and international laws should be impose on the usage of cars. people would buy cars for comfort, status, harsh weather and safety reasons. moreover, compelling them to follow laws would turn them into rebels. For example; a country like uk where the weather is extreme people cannot afford to use cycles or animals and public transport would not be sufficient to cater the size of population. Hence, it is evidently clear that ownership of cars is a mandate.
On the contrary, ownership of vehicles would harm the environment and would also create problems such as traffic congestion and cause devastating effects on public health. The best ways to control this is to manage the sales of cars and discard the old and vintage vehicles. Furthermore, introducing laws should be enforced by educating the people both residents and nonlocals. For instance; improving public transport and by applying high taxes on automobile purchase this goal can be achieved. Nevertheless, it seems possible to control the usage of cars by employing the above said approaches.
To conclude, cars are the primary source of transport and an alternative is the need of the hour to protect our mother nature by introducing laws.
Now a days people believe that government should invest tax payers money in health care others believe that money should be used in other areas. discuss both points of views and give your opinion.
Hook revenue collected should be channeled in a proper way.
Paraphrase
question government bodies should allocate money to improve health care facilities across the nation while others oppose this idea as various other fields demand investment too.
discussion
statement this essay will discuss both views by presenting reasons, evidences and opinion.
Main idea public health care of many countries is at risk due to lack of investment.
reason 1 hospitals, employees and even patients are indeed deserve improved facilities to combat the challenges faced
evidence 1 For example in India the condition of hospitals is deteriorating and needs extra care which is possible when the government aid is provided.
reason 2 tax money has to allocated for the development of public health care as a healthy nation can improve the economy of the country.
evidence 2 for instance; providing free vaccination to children, 3rd generation medicines to fight detrimental diseases and free treatment for serious illness.
Conclusion investment in health care is a better idea compared to other forms of investment.
Main idea tax allocation has to extremely device as return on investment is pivotal.
reason 1 Most people consider that other areas also demand investment such as armed forces, education and infrastructure
evidence 1 it is the prime duty of the nation to protect the borders from enemies and also maintain peace and harmony internally. educate the people and provide better transport facilities for the development.
reason 2 moreover, art, culture and reservations cannot ignored
evidence 2 country generates revenue from tourism and it has to be developed by promoting it with perks and renovations
Conclusion Apart from healthcare other fields also seek investments.
Opinion I strongly believe that the policies of nations should be revived to use the tax in proper fashion for the development of the nation
conclusion health care is primary however, other areas cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 32.0 10.4138276553 307% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 41.998997996 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3760.0 1615.20841683 233% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 699.0 315.596192385 221% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3791130186 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14184870769 4.20363070211 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94639835482 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 337.0 176.041082164 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482117310443 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1134.0 506.74238477 224% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 16.0721442886 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1931302 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9714285714 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34285714286 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727527556397 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023621673957 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527887805825 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0240999796336 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562135711735 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 78.4519038076 215% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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