If a product is of good quality and meets people's needs, people will buy it. Advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As advertising has a widespread transmission, it is a powerful method to introduce new products to the public. The quality and unique features of the goods presenting via ads will attract potential customers to buy them. Meanwhile, the amount of information on TV or newspapers provides choices that satisfy different ages and various tastes. It helps consumers to make decisions which one would better meet their demands. And this is indeed an effective way for companies to promote sales. As advertisement plays a role as a connector for firms who provide products and services and people who purchase them.
It is a matter of fact that advertising is developing to be an independent industry. It affords numbers of employment opportunities and boosts modern economy. Sometimes, advertisements are charming and well-filmed. They are so delicately designed that could compare a work of art. We could cultivate the ability of creation and imagination when appreciate advertisements. They also enrich our leisure time. Thus, it is inadequate to define advertising only as a form of entertainment.
Taking all the aspects into consideration, I assume that it is impossible to ignore the role of advertising when we select products. Furthermore, its function is becoming wider and wider.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258928571429 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.174107142857 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0580357142857 0.0946595960268 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446428571429 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0714285714286 0.0437548338989 163% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.09375 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.03125 0.0403226058552 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.2846764633 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0758928571429 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0178571428571 0.021408717616 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0223214285714 0.011925033212 187% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1290.0 1933.35771543 67% => OK
No of words: 203.0 316.048096192 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35467980296 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20517956788 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.418719211823 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334975369458 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.261083743842 0.203846283523 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.192118226601 0.137316102897 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2846764633 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679802955665 0.56093040696 121% => OK
Word variations: 75.7697210674 60.7387585426 125% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.5333333333 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2388611281 49.517814964 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 127.492653851 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.814263465372 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 47.0308702791 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.32307692308 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357992290482 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0592069682457 0.102741220458 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0496910401256 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.420427111195 0.534860350844 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12226825413 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120938180782 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684793576381 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279158699382 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0037903686367 0.0638462369009 6% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249878255695 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381476729257 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.