if you are given an opportunity to study a subject which you have never studied, which subject will you choose?

Essay topics:

if you are given an opportunity to study a subject which you have never studied, which subject will you choose?

If I am given a chance to study a subject which I have never studied, then I will choose interior designing. I have many reasons for preferring this subject, and I will explain it in the following paragraphs.

Firstly, I am a person who likes to spend my leisure times by making room decor items. I always like to keep my home neat and ordered with minimal furniture and artworks. Knowledge in interior designing will definitely help me to organize my home beautifully. For a calm atmosphere, the choice of colors in a house is crucial. Learning interior designing will help to understand which color is apt for a kitchen, or which color will create a peaceful environment in a study room or reading room.

Secondly, I have a hobby of growing plants. One of my dreams is to grow an indoor garden in my home. I hope that studying interior designing will pave ways to fulfill this dream because I will get to know about suitable plants to plant in an indoor garden which requires optimum sunlight.

In a home, decor such as wall hangings, fairy lights, etc. have a significant role in creating a pleasant mood. If you didn’t use the right products, then the results will be exactly the opposite. To avoid this, it is always better to enough knowledge about such decorative items before you purchase it. In this way, you can also save money.

Considering all the above-mentioned advantages and practical applications, I will go for pursuing interior designing, if given an opportunity.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82170542636 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83535543279 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9053994134 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322477424392 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882855149076 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100382950558 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16644945222 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108554029781 0.056905535591 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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