A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child to develop?
Childhood is the most beautiful period in one’s life. Children are always more curious than adults. They keep questioning everything they observe or listen. Hence, it is the duty of parents and others to raise children with proper care and attention. When you gift a child with something, remember that it is going to contribute to their mental and physical development.
Books are one of the options as a gift. It can be a coloring book or a storybook. Children will begin to differentiate between different colors when they start coloring. Parents can read out stories for children make them read themselves, as this activity boosts the imagination skills.
Sports items are equally important as books. Games such as football or badminton are good for the physical health of a child. Make sure to practice these games outdoor so that children gets some fresh air and also develop a bond with nature.
One can gift a child with board games such as chess or snake and ladder. These kind of games help in the mental growth. Also these will help in developing ideas about numbers. Gifts such as mobile phones or video games are the least advised ones. Parents usually think that children can watch cartoons in mobile phones. But this will definitely retard the mental growth. There is also a chance of addiction to mobile phone usage which is very difficult to treat.
I also suggest to avoid gender biased toys as gifts. We are in a society where gender equality is one of the major issues. So if we can break the stereotype by not gifting our girl child with a kitchen set, or our boy child with an automobile, we are setting an example to others.
Thus I strongly recommend to choose gifts for children wisely as it is going to mould their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ames such as chess or snake and ladder. These kind of games help in the mental growth. Als...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ind of games help in the mental growth. Also these will help in developing ideas abo...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest avoiding'.
Suggestion: suggest avoiding
... is very difficult to treat. I also suggest to avoid gender biased toys as gifts. We are in ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e are setting an example to others. Thus I strongly recommend to choose gifts fo...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend choosing'.
Suggestion: recommend choosing
... example to others. Thus I strongly recommend to choose gifts for children wisely as it is goin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y as it is going to mould their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76872964169 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44071554732 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0021423306 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.652173913 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.347826087 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08695652174 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233864622395 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584886042269 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759766928619 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107634450361 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411023780027 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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