The table below gives information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table summarises the number of different types of independent films released in the UK and republic of Ireland in 2012. the table also provides the percentage of income from the ticket sale of different types of films released.
Films of genre comedy made highest profit from ticket sale with 26 releases. In 2012, 14 horror movies were released and they have a total income of 20 %. Only one biopic was released in this year but it bagged third position in the table with 9.1 % of income from ticket sale. documentary films and drama films are the type of movies with highest number of releases. Unfortunately, the income of these kind of movies is below 10 %. Romance movies are the least profited ones.
In general, we can say that the audience prefers horror and comedy movies compared to other categories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84285714286 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.436378088 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4252717674 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0597594722467 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287197195166 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462812625743 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447870803273 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481447812216 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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