Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at the risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to to ensure the survival of local languages, if so, how ?
English is a universal language. There is no room for argument that it is the most suitable language for global communication. Many people belive that learning english at school have advantages over learning regional languages. However, I am inclined to believe that learning a local language is as important as learning english.
A regional language is a part of culture of a particular area. There are many words and phrases that are typical of a language which may be connected to its origin. A language is a refection of the lifestyle of a group of people who share the common tounge. Hence, it is really important to teach the local language in schools. Children should primarily develop a connection with the place and its native language in order to to perceive the dimensions of other languages.
Learning english is also important these days. Considering the need for world wide access of knowledge and information, english is the apt medium. People are migrating other countries for education, job and other purposes. Without english, this will not be possible. Migrating to a country and learning the local language is nearly impossible. In addition, english bridges the gap between international buissiness men and respective consumers.
To conclude, we cannot argue that local languages should be given more priority than english or vice versa. Both are equally significant. The right way of communication is the key factor for a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18987341772 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9056507929 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0837976191 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340931132946 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104461691369 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11466479333 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208169574003 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12887729897 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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