Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia illiteracy is on the increase. Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society
It is incontrovertible fact that today, illiteracy became a pressing issue in all over the world. This problem now increasing in the developed countries where, before this issue has been only seen in under developing countries. This essay examines the possible causes behind it along with its effects that are being witnessed on the society.
To embark with, there are two main reasons related this problem. Firstly, the people have negative attitude towards the studies. For example, in the developed countries government give the many type of facilities to the people. Like, if they have not job then they give them money for their expenses and then they feel they have not need of study. Because, the government give them everything without education. But these type of facilities are not available in under developed countries. Secondly, the people migrate to these countries which increase the level of illiteracy in that countries. Due to, those people has no proficient in the native language and they counted the uneducated population.
In addition to this, it has some effect on the social and economic aspects. If people will uneducated it as effect on society like they will start to do illegal activities . Moreover, they will have not any job also, they will earn anything for them which can lead the poverty in these countries. Because, they will depend on the other countries for their ever work.
In conclusion, illiteracy has reached in those areas where anyone never thought about it. And, majority of this happening because of globalisation and facilities which is effecting development of Australia and USA countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...developed countries government give the many type of facilities to the people. Like, if t...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...s to the people. Like, if they have not job then they give them money for their exp...
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Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...penses and then they feel they have not need of study. Because, the government give ...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they feel they have not need of study. Because, the government give them everything wi...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...they will start to do illegal activities . Moreover, they will have not any job al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18045112782 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68364539673 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.014663597 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198629192324 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638623896703 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489419856341 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136427570731 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639548639811 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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