immigration has a major impact on the society
what are the main reasons of immigartion
to what consequences can it lead?
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immigration has a major impact on the society
what are the main reasons of immigration
to what consequences can it lead?

Submitted by Patel Romaa on Mon, 07/19/2021 - 11:14
Nowadays, the majority of people migrate from one place to another place just because of a living better life and future career and there are a lot of reasons for why abundant of people go to out of the country however,there are also some consequences related to this trend.
To begin with, there are predominant reasons for migrating from one country to another.first and foremost reason in abroad country they have a plethora of opportunities for their good education in university and scholarship after that they have better job application and also tack high salary so they can fulfill their dream. second reason, immensely people like travel freak person and they can explore the different places and also they can learn new culture and also a western tradition and apart from new languages hence easily to cooperate with each everyone.in addtion to this , improve their business marketing skills.
Moreover, there are also many more drawbacks due to the immigrants, firstly decrease the economic level for many developing countries. for instance, in Indian people go to overseas countries such as the USA and UK and also Canada for their higher education because they think that they give good scholarships and camps so they decide to go foreign secondly if people migrate the other country thus they have lost their culture and tradition. furthermore, destroy the history and they can not learn properly related history so there are consequences arise.
In recapitulation, migrating community is a good way to living a standard lifestyle and also it is more beneficial for our life and also our children but some drawbacks, not neglect for our culture and traditional
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31502890173 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82040925219 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552023121387 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.012996391 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.875 106.682146367 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.25 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167845713826 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110503227304 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195935479308 0.0667982634062 293% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186585011604 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.227715539006 0.056905535591 400% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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