The importance of academic subjects as compared to extracurricular activities is increasing every day. Some people suggest that sports classes should be sacrificed in High School so students can concentrate on Academic subjects. Do you agree or disagree ?
We are living in a highly competent era where the importance of a good education is extremely high. This is the reason parents today motivate their children to pay more attention to academic subjects at school and not get involved in other extracurricular activities. It appears to be a valid move but it cannot diminish the importance of sports activity in the life of school going children.
Sports classes must not be compromised because they are helpful in many ways. Firstly, they offer good physical exercise and psychological relaxation, both of which are vital for the physical and mental growth of students. Secondly, sports teach plenty of important skills like team work, communication, strategy development and so on. It is indeed difficult to cover such aspects of life under academic subjects. Finally, sports in school always helps in identifying talented children. This is very important because spotting talent for sport at a tender age can result in the creation of a legend in years to come.
On the other hand, some people argue that we should remove sports sessions because playing cannot help in improving academic performance of students. They also add that the economies of the world are growing in such a way that better academic degrees will be essential to survive and grow in the future.
All in all, I admit that academic subjects are becoming very important these days, but it doesn't imply that we should remove sports classes from schools. Thus I disagree with the statement because I firmly believe that we need healthy, sporty and energetic graduates to lead the future.world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74156280058 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2616368866 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281485400928 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880100729646 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049400166681 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160851747802 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321910380608 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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