Popular events like the football worldcup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safeway. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this competitive world the famous sports festivals are the best channel to break the barriers among nations and enjoy the sprint of the game. These events will bring people together to support their country participation which eventually increase the love for their nation in a healthy way. This essay completely agrees to the fact that competitive sports would definitely raise the nationalism among the populace and build harmony in peoples lives.
It’s definitely a proud moment for any citizens to watch their national flag waving in an international sporting event. In many countries the population is politically divided by race, religion, wealth, and many other social and economical problems however, sporting events has the magic to break all these stumbling blocks and bring everyone together under one roof to support their team’s participation in an intercontinental event. Though, they were facing a major civil war in their country, Syria had qualified to the soccer world cup that lead to put a breakoff to the bloodshed inorder to honour their national teams hardwork and participation.
Certainly, there is high probability for children and youngsters to get attracted and inspired to build a career goal to represent their mother land in a global platform with waring the republic’s jersey printed with their national flag. Watching their nations These occasions will also encourage individuals who are not good in sports to join army or pick any federal jobs to be a part of their land’s nations state’s development. The famous argentina football player Mr.Lionel Messi had mentioned in one of his interview that he decided to pick football as a career after watching his county lifting the soccer world cup for 1978.
To conclude, well known competitive games will absolutely increase the individuals public spirit towards their nation and bring peace and happiness to homes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33663366337 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77092533437 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6391800817 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.7 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948802916443 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432266541149 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032264926479 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537110343694 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323785223971 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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