In this modern generation, numbers of industries and personal vehicles are growing rapidly, which is directly affecting our natural environment. All of the environmental problems are caused by human activities. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how the problems can be alleviated.
The reasons for damaging our natural environment seem quite simple. Firstly, uses of plastic items and not able to recycle it. Due to lack of awareness about recycling people tend to through garbages in seas and roadsides, that impacts on living creatre of lands and oceans. Most people dump sewage in rivers, which can destroy entire habitats of sea creatures. Secondly, due to air pollution caused by vehicles and large factories nowadays, almost every person has their own private vehicle, which affects the air quality. Moreover, pollution produced by large industries is also harmful for our environment and people; we can catch various health problems if we live in places with poor air quality. For example, as per NASA and other research, the ozone layer, which protects our climate from UV radiations from reaching to earth, now it has becomed more thinner due to human activities like air pollution and slowly it could harms people with some serious desease like cancer.
To solve the problems, a comprehensive public campaign is needed. A good way to control the natural environment would be to explain it to the public via television and social media platforms, because the majority of people find it more interesting to watch some awareness programs on their phones while sitting at home. Similarly, if people start to use electric vehicles or more public transportation and chimneys for industries, then this might help control the air contamination.
In conclusion, there is a lack of awareness about the recycling and use of more private cars, which makes our environment more polluted; however, increasing public awareness about the natural environment and using more public vehicles can control our environment.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ctly affecting our natural environment. All of the environmental problems are caused by hu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 854, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'thinner' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: thinner
...m reaching to earth, now it has becomed more thinner due to human activities like air pollut...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 930, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'harm'
Suggestion: harm
... like air pollution and slowly it could harms people with some serious desease like c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77034165752 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5443300517 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141757970468 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502741129195 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647435990825 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878819041767 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323600566101 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ctly affecting our natural environment. All of the environmental problems are caused by hu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 854, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'thinner' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: thinner
...m reaching to earth, now it has becomed more thinner due to human activities like air pollut...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 930, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'harm'
Suggestion: harm
... like air pollution and slowly it could harms people with some serious desease like c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77034165752 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5443300517 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141757970468 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502741129195 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647435990825 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878819041767 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323600566101 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.