An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
Online shopping platform has a vital role in nowadays world economy. Due to the network system, people from different places are now brought together into one community. Communication with others is more convenient. People from different places can easily access an online market. However, there are both advantages and detrimental effect on each online shopper in different ways, depending on how we use it.
Online shopping help reducing time and cost. When customers can simply contact the seller, initiating production and delivering are faster than to place an order face to face. Thus, there is no need to spend extra budget on transportation. For instance, online shoppers need to pay for delivery which is cheaper compared to shoppers who need to pay for their budget on travelling between shop and home. Moreover, Online advertising is cheaper and easier for many companies too. On the other hand, some online store’s security policies are not strict enough that lead to fraud. Since scamming is a rare occasion, the number of online shoppers tends to rise.
While online shopping is on an increase, local products selling rate seem to be stable. The reason for this situation is because lesser people shop on an online platform rather than a local store. With that being said, to encourage people to buy local products, local stores can contribute their shop by joining an online shopping platform. This way shopper can conveniently reach their local store and improve the selling rate.
To conclude, online shopping platform can improve the shopping experience with how convenient and simple to reach by shoppers. It can also revolutionize a local store into a well-known store. While disadvantage can occur, trading goods with no bad intention can prevent such indecent situation from happening.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...line shopping platform has a vital role in nowadays world economy. Due to the network syste...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rent ways, depending on how we use it. Online shopping help reducing time and c...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...how we use it. Online shopping help reducing time and cost. When customers can simpl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...mber of online shoppers tends to rise. While online shopping is on an increase,...
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Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...al store and improve the selling rate. To conclude, online shopping platform ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25085910653 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63743409775 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.68009975 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4210526316 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313063294681 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998527199617 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692478093257 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181916169677 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066276107596 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.