The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
These figures aim to provide an information about the whole process of concrete production, covering the cement manufacturing procedure.
Generally, the first substrates, limestone and clay, were added into the cement mixer, heated by a heater, a cement production was completed. Using a proper amount of concrete mixtures with a right quantity of cement can lead to a high-quality concrete as an outcome for the concrete making process.
As shown in the first figure, in order to produce a cement powder, limestone and clay were crushed by a crushing device. The powder was combined in the mixer machine and then was sent into a rotating pipe which is heated by a torch. Finally, the powder was sent through a grinder where a fine cement came out.
In the second figure, showing how to make a concrete, half of the concrete mixtures was made up from gravel via small stones, 25% of it is sand, 15% is cement and the remaining is water. In the end, those composition are poured into a concrete mixing instrument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this composition' or 'those compositions'?
Suggestion: this composition; those compositions
...and the remaining is water. In the end, those composition are poured into a concrete mixing instr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88505747126 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69242906377 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.783201366 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290104745214 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114138176872 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845174989162 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167203293762 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814331253057 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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