Currently, the level of traffic and pollution problems are growing. Some people believe that the best solution to overcome these problems is by increasing the petrol fare. I completely disagree with this view and opine that there are more effective measures to tackle this issue.
The reason why I disagree is because increasing petrol fare will not stop people from using their private vehicles. This is because people do not have another comfortable and safe option to travel to their destined places. Hence, the best option for them is by using their own transportation. Instead, the price of commodities will also increase because of the increase in petrol fare, and will cause country's economy to suffer.
Meanwhile, other option that can be done and will tackle the problem more effectively is improving existing public transportation and provide them with affordable fares. If public transportation such as rapid train and buses are in a good and safe condition, people will more likely to be willing to ride them. Moreover, providing them with affordable fares will also encourage people to ride them instead of using their money to pay for petrol. For example, public transportation in Singapore is great and has affordable fares which cause a lot of people to ride them. As a result, the level of traffic congestion and pollution in Singapore is low.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that the best solution to overcome pollution and traffic problems is by increasing petrol fare because it will not stop people from using their private vehicles and will cause other commodities price to rise which will lead to the suffer of economy. However, there is another more effective solution which involve improving existing public transportation and provide them with affordable fares.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...his issue. The reason why I disagree is because increasing petrol fare will not stop pe...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dities price to rise which will lead to the suffer of economy. However, there is another m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23103448276 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73296039721 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437931034483 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4138262644 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.357142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16045205445 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693312430412 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450119632405 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124965035589 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451885376029 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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