Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that environment-related issue is only able to tackle by governments and official companies, and individual incapable of dealing with this issue. Personally, I am in disagree with this statement by following some reasons.
The first reason, if the government has to endure all of the responsibility of minimizing pollution as well as pay the national budget for cleaning and refreshing rivers. Therefore, this places a heavy burden on the authorities because they are not only allocated for environmental issues but also other problems such as metro systems or scientific studies. Imagine if the government had responsibility for this issue; however, the resident is unaware of environmental issues, the pollution air problem would continue to happen even increase.
In terms of individuals, I also believed that the standard of living, particularly, the environment, is likely to facilitate by the public. For instance, instead of utilizing nylon bags or plastic bottles when we shopping, using recycled bags or inox bottles, leading to minimize the pollution river and improve urban beauty. Not to mention that individual also contributes to deal with this problem by minimizing domestic waste. Moreover, we are able to cut down the amount of gas released from vehicles, so we should use public transport rather than the private car.
In conclusion, with the aforementioned example and explanations, I suppose that not only did the government and great companies take responsibility for tackling environment-related issues but also the public mainly account for this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...reason, if the government has to endure all of the responsibility of minimizing pollution ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50406504065 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30127354711 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0585973449 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.4 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884909247913 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372095677988 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355170083825 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647171179413 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034745968313 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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