Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Opinions are divided on whether some people suppose that they should get accustomed to uncomfortable cases or others think that instead of accepting them, they would do better to improve these situations. Personally, I am in agreement with the later view, even though the other one also shows some positive aspects.
The option to get used to unsatisfied cases is attractive for some reasons. When people consent with the reality situation could counteract their drepression from their jobs, and reduce the pressure of society, even may help people get on well with each other. For instance, instead of irritating when someone are late in a meeting because of getting stuck in trafic tram, people should sympathize with their mistake. This is not only give someone a sense of relexation but also help themself become more comforatable; thus, life would turn into easier to breath if everyone accommodated themselves to others position and accept a negative situation.
Nevertheless, I believe it is more beneficial to find the various ways which may turn a negative circumtance into a positive ones. To begin with, strong-willed people who always secure different chances to overcome their problems, find their weakness to improve it,and particularly get out of their comfortable zone to challenge themselves with new experiences. These people almost have a tendency to get more achievements than who stay put in a safe area, on top of that people should be taught the value of failure and how to use it as a stepping stone to success. Let’s take job releated issue as a typical example, climbing the career ladder, wokers have to face serious problems and unsatified situations by complaing from their bosses and clients after all that are certain hands-on experiences which could help themselves to apply to new job in the future.
In conclusion, while the way of accepting a bad case concentrate some people with a certain benefits, it seem to me that people are more likely to be successful in their career if they always face and overcome the problems instead of staying put.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is
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... a negative circumtance into a positive ones. To begin with, strong-willed people wh...
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Suggestion: , and
...blems, find their weakness to improve it,and particularly get out of their comfortab...
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Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...some people with a certain benefits, it seem to me that people are more likely to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07558139535 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75831502638 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4739284465 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.727272727 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162490247303 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628735330336 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392990714884 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109423506758 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369216780683 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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