Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe a single person can't do anything to make improvement in our surrounding environment, it is only governments and large companies who can contribute and make differences. But, I feel we live on earth so its every individuals responsibility to help in making the environment clean and better place to live.
At the first place, we should understand what exactly effects the environment. We know the pollution level has increased considerably today, so if we as an individual try and avoid using vehicles for short distance travelling or may take up public transport, this will definitely help. Further, if everyone starts planting trees in one year, we will be able to grow equal number of trees as our population and make our place greener. Also, we generally tend to keep our home clean and throw out garbage outside, may be on streets, instead of this we can make sure every house in our society/area is properly disposing the waste in central bin, thus the chances of air pollution or spreading of diseases will come down to zero and we can help in making our environment clean.
On the other hand, the governments and large companies can surely make major contribution and in making the differences, but we should also equally help government by taking steps and responsibility. Each one of us if takes full responsibility of keeping the surrounding clean at the lower level, eventually at the higher level this will make big difference.
To sum up, we as an individual has lot more to do to protect our environment, it is just that we need to start acting upon it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
Some people believe a single person cant do anything to make improvement in our ...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...erably today, so if we as an individual try and avoid using vehicles for short distance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, i feel, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84249084249 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94062776602 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5180942784 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.888888889 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211192737401 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983682764013 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974358451383 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15168217366 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878324732287 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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