Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, gender discrimination is uncommon whereas gender equality has been accepted, although some people are of the view that still lot of progress is needed. In this essay, I will discuss on both sides of the argument and present my opinion on the same. Firstly, I will explore how women are expected to attend home and office both while men are only supposed to work in the office. Secondly, I will expand ideas on how woman’s have reached different heights and secured jobs in different sectors.
To begin with, the stereotype of women bonded with household chores and men should not involve in the same is still pervasive. Even though females have started getting into corporate jobs, they are still expected to do the cooking, cleaning and parenting alone, while men have to only bother about their office job. As per student survey, there are about more than 50% of men who still cannot cook food for themselves. Additionally, in film industries, even in today’s modern world, we can see more number of superhero movies compared to superheroine movies.
In most of the countries, females have received lot of respect and opportunities that they deserve. For example, in American multinational companies, today the ratio of men to women employees is 1:1. Furthermore, woman has created their footprint in all the professions, may it be driver, worker, manager, doctor, engineer, officer or army woman.
In conclusion, gender equality is promoted and accepted in lot of countries, in today’s times. However, in my opinion, in many nations, still woman is not considered and given equal importance as men, hence there is a lot of efforts that needs to be taken to make sure all the genders are treated equally.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04181184669 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69855172328 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4994791194 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130711035438 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456690063717 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647674112605 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805142126027 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724816899905 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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