Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live.
Write an email to your friend. In your email,
describe where you lived when you were a student at the university
recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation
warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation
Dear Suraj,
I hope you are your family is doing well. Firstly, I would start with congratulating you on your big success of being selected for a full-time course in the reputed university. Ideally speaking, I am your senior now, just kidding!
Secondly, I am happy to help you with some suggestions on your house hunting as I still have few of my connections living near the campus. I stayed in a 3 BHK house in a room sharing arrangement. The living room was quite huge and spacious, while there were two washrooms, one kitchen, a beautiful backyard, and a small garden just besides the porch.
I would suggest you to consider visiting the places in person, since I feel the best way to select an accommodation is by looking for ourselves. Hence, I would recommend you to please start your house watching as soon as you are in campus. Though you can shortlist and talk to owners beforehand and plan your visit accordingly once you reach on the campus.
Additionally, from my experience I would like to warn you from the scamsters available on the facebook and other house renting platforms. Many of them are genuine sellers or owners of the house, but few of them are faking it. Sometimes in times of desperation we tend to pay advance amount before even looking at the place, please do not make such silly mistakes. Also, don’t look for places too far away from campus, hence loosing money on commute from home to college.
Wishing you all the best for your travel and hope to see you soon at the campus.
Best Regards,
Firdous
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...on, since I feel the best way to select an accommodation is by looking for ourselves. Hence, I w...
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Line 8, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally, from my experience I would like to warn you from the scamsters available on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68864468864 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58331369379 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7767705811 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310061086003 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103860048645 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812775055742 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186985254109 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071739593039 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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