Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection. However, whether every citizen can make contributions to the improvements of environment or they are sole responsibilities of governments and corporations has caused heated debate. My view is that the cooperation between authorities, firms and residents should be required.
On the one hand, it is clear that governments and big companies have been taking several measures in order to curb environmental pollution. While some factories have installed waste treatment systems with a view to restricting toxic chemicals discarded into the rivers, governments are actively involved in international treaties of carbon neutrality. This is because both parties will obtain sustainable benefits if the systems and agreements are applied in large scale and in long term. Besides, the powerful authorities also enact laws that punishments will be given to those who deliberately do harm to the environment. For example, Singaporean inhabitants who were found to have littered in the public park via CCTV system will have to pay over $200 in fines.
On the other hand, the involvement of dwellers in environmental preservation should also be taken into account. Firstly, residents in many countries have been making efforts to change their shopping behaviors, in particular, replacing plastic bags with recyclable ones. If people continue utilizing the synthetic holders despite governmental endeavors, soil and water will keep being contaminated. Furthermore, residents’ daily travel is also a contributor to increasing amount of emissions that are to blame for air pollution and global warming apart from industrial production. Private cars and motorbikes, whose numbers are on the rise, engender significant amount of greenhouse gases such as CO2 and CO. Therefore, only when inhabitants’ preferable means of transportation are switched to public ones, will the air quality be improved.
In conclusion, governments and corporations play a pioneering role in the fight against environmental pollution, which ensures the sustainability of human life. Meanwhile, we should not underestimate the other crucial roles citizens are undertaking.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80487804878 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33653611253 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673780487805 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8172940224 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972910414415 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267274826914 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446120074174 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564514300393 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407803645246 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.