Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, environmental problem has been one of the most controversial issue that almost every country is facing. While many people believe that the government and big firms solely create the positive impact on the environment, i strongly agree with a view that every single citizen could also make contributions to the protect their own surroundings.
First, It is no doubt that human activities have the greatest influence on the environment throughout the history and environmental protection is a long-term process. This means that only by raising the public’s awareness of the happening situation can we prevent the degradation of the environment. Therefore, environmental conservation is duty and obligation of each person towards what he or she has caused, even government or any large corporations could not themselves solve the problem without any support from the community.
Moreover, based on public’s needs and behaviors, the government and companies then carry out suitable policies and strategies to meet their customers. For example, if everyone boycotts throw-away products like plastic bottles, then all the company manufacturing such products will switch to eco-friendly alternatives to compete with other opponents in the market.
That is not to say that government and big firms cannot do such positive things to the environment. They are pioneers who will guide people to go the right way. Indeed, the government can enact laws, introduce nature conservation programs , the companies can promote green products to change the consumers’s habits. However, to achieve the success, they need every citizen’s comments and assistance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64031620553 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21367175601 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664031620553 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5178476254 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215660512078 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685128012256 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572203728126 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111421446227 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477869852631 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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