Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays an effect of people on the Earth and its environment is becoming more and more significant that it used to be decades or centuries ago. It is considered by some individuals that this impact fosters to disappearing of species and losing their diversity. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with above mentioned situation and propose some possible solutions to avoid it.
People's activity harms the nature as well as plants, animals, birds and fish. What I mean is that society creates a lot of pollution killing many creatures of our planet since few human beings consider about their influence on the environment. For example, in Russia one company tested its new product for fish in a lake. Unfortunately, a man working in this firm had not controlled the final result. Consequently, the lake were poisoned and all fish died out. As for another cause, it is possible to mark people's mind. To be precise, many individuals believe that there is no limit on the Earth, that is why their disinterest and consumer attitude such as an uncontrolled hunting will not endanger nature and biological creatures. Regrettably, it is not so.
As for solutions which may help overcome these problems and causes, I would like to suggest followings. Firstly, people should develop more effective ways of protecting our effect on the environment. For instance, using an artificial intelligence is an excellent decision which can reduce a human error. It goes without saying that the less people's mistakes the better environment we will obtain. Secondly, the life intention of human beings and their attitude to nature as well as its creatures should be altered. For example, special lessons on relationship between individuals and environment may be established at schools and universities.
To sum up, people's activity and their attitude to all surroundings are the main causes of negative changes in the world's ecosystem. However, computers, artificial intelligences and specific lessons may solve these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26461538462 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94150627597 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.085749125 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0526315789 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107684566531 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281614216276 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347236366246 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063324214496 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00974006235983 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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