Intelligence is the most important component of leadership Do you agree or disagree Give your opinion and support it with adequate examples

Essay topics:

Intelligence is the most important component of leadership. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and support it with adequate examples.

It goes without saying that leadership is a quiet hard task and it requires many important qualities to carry out various types of responsibilities It is considered by many people that talent is a pivotal factor of leadership. I totally disagree with this statement and in my opinion, few others components are also more or less equally important for a good and successful leadership.
Firstly, politeness is an utmost requirement for leadership in every profession and if an intelligent leader is not humble and soft spoken then it would not be healthy either for the organization success or employees. To illustrate, if a doctor is not polite with patients then in spite of having reputed degrees he might be not famous among people.
secondly, the way of communication is also important in many works such as in business or information technology. For instance, if a leader is intelligent and very well understand a technical or instrumental problem but this skill is useless if he cannot communicate properly with further concern person.
In addition, observation and dedication to work are also necessary skills. For further explanation, clever eyes are required to look around all of the staff and it will improve the concentration of workers. Similarly, commitment to work is always required for leaders because if they are not punctual for their work they other employees will not obey them.
To conclude, intelligence is an important criterion of leadership, however, without other components intelligence is not an incomplete quality of leadership.

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Average: 8.3 (48 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in spite of', 'more or less']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224264705882 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.132352941176 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0946595960268 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0919117647059 0.0501214627716 183% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0477941176471 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139705882353 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0220588235294 0.0403226058552 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16411124962 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220588235294 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00367647058824 0.00163938923432 224% => OK
Determiners: 0.0698529411765 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183823529412 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1563.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.252 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.192 0.137316102897 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16411124962 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 61.6290198193 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5668037894 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.3 127.492653851 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 0.814263465372 233% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 57.8 49.1944974215 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.41891891892 1.69124875643 84% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293294995896 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100220863575 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0497437167153 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.669014771806 0.534860350844 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15301594747 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129716757606 0.134430193775 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684371400714 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.187322312269 0.324371583561 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.052140643041 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184849575549 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678440744912 0.058150111329 117% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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