International travel is extremely popular these days.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
It is true that, travelling is part and parcels of every person's life. In this day and age, travelling to abroad is becoming incredibly popular among the masses. This essay intends to examine not only the advantages but also the negative consequences of this tendency in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to motion, there are manifold positive outcomes which are associated with this trend. First and foremost, it crates employment opportunities for the local civilians. To demonstrate, if people migrate to any different nation for any reason, then they require guide who is well familiar with that place who can help them to explore different places while travelling as well as it is beneficial for local businesses as visitors purchase several products in order to fulfill their needs,and spend enormous amount of money.As a consequence, it help to mitigate the unemployment from the nation, and leads to economic growth. Besides it, the another reason why it is worthwhile to go to any other nation an individual can learn about the customs and traditions of a country together with one can uplift their lifestyle, and get to know how to deal with different people in different circumstances. In this way, a person can broader their horizon of knowledge.
However, on the flip side there are numerous drawbacks which are attached with this phenomenon. Principally, more space is needed to build infrastructure such as hotels, malls to assign basic amenities to the visitors, and plants are cut down to set up great number of restaurants, cinemas by the masses, and huge amount of money is also required for such type of establishments to bear this astronomical outlays government have to cut down it's budget from other sectors. Hence, this approach has detrimental effects on ecology and human being as well. Furthermore, the beauty of historical monuments vanish out since tourists put waste around these buildings while visiting over there, and chances of robbery rises .Thus, it spoils the name of a country, tourists do not want to come on these destinations
To recapitulate, although this phenomenon has both positive and negative results, government can balance the whole situation by implementing the rational approach, and maximize the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23641304348 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88458350735 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.245260252 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.583333333 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166156305586 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688226968905 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066407418826 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106080863809 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908291746347 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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