Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that, planting more and more trees is fruitful not only for human beings but also for ecology. In this day and age, It is highly debatable issue among the individuals, some masses advocate that it is more crucial to plant trees in open areas, in towns and cities rather than provide more housing. I accord with the assigned assertion up to large extent, this essay intends to examine my view point in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to the motion, there are manifold reasons why I agree with the given statement up to large extent. First and foremost, oxygen is provided to civilians by plants to breathe. To demonstrate, if sufficient amount of tress are planted by individuals they can easily survive by inhaling oxygen which is required to human body as plants inhale carbon dioxide, and release oxygen during the process of photosynthesis. In addition to it, trees are the great source of food and vegetables they give enormous quantity of these products; therefore,large number of trees should be planted instead of providing housing facilities. Moreover, the another considerable point is that, plants aid to clean the environment. It can be explained as trees help to remove harmful chemicals from the ecology with the assistance of rainfall because where there are more trees,there is more rain,and help to wash out the atmosphere. As a consequence, it will be beneficial to get rid from trouble of contamination.
Further emphasizing on my views. Principally, plants are the living place of ample of wild animals and birds while living there animals feel safe. If these plants are cut down by individuals ,
then these animals would lost their habitat, and become extinct due unfavorable circumstances. Thus, the whole food chain will be vanished out. Paradoxically, more number of houses should be built because population is increasing at an alarming rate housing is one of the basic necessity of life.Masses are shifting to distinct locations in search of jobs,employment especially in urban centers, and start to live there, so houses should be built over there otherwise, individuals will start to built houses in illegal areas such as on river bank for the purpose of living.
To recapitulate,although making houses are important in living areas, I conceive that plantation of trees is more crucial to save the environment rather than making houses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18320610687 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94646002595 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575063613232 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0940384772 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3125 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31670442844 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864832277466 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952446747429 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163010879832 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100030977242 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.