International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent decades there has been a substantial diversification in international tourism destinations, and many countries have experienced phenomenal growth in tourist arrivals. While it is true that this industry has brought both benefits and drawbacks, I believe that the advantages are outweighed by the negative consequences of this development.
The idea that, both travellers and host country benefit enourmously from international travel. Firstly, tourists have opportunities to enjoy a whale of a time in forein country. they will be rewarded by natural areas of a beauty which cannot be experienced in their homeland or they are able to acquire a wide range of local traditions and customs. Secondly, global tourism is associated with developing in economy of host country. As international travel companies expand to meet the rising in demand for tourists, more jobs are created within communities, reducing the unemployment figures, leading to the increasing in prosperity.
On the other hand, it seems to me that the drawbacks which raise cause for concern outweigh the benefits. In terms of the visitors themselves, they are often overcharged everything from a taxi, a meal in a restaurant or buying souvenirs with grossly inflated prices. From the host country perspective, tourism is the main cause for environmental degradation. Because of unregulated constructions of hotels and tourist attractions, a great deal of trees were cut down, leading to ecological imbalance as well as speeding up the process of global warming. many beach resorts in Thailand and Malaysia, for instance, have become concrete jungles of high-rise hotels and apartments to accommodate mass tourism from Europe.
In conclusion, I will restate my view again that there are more disadvantages of international travel for both travelllers and host countries than the good aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eding up the process of global warming. many beach resorts in Thailand and Malaysia,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52083333333 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22526646186 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6841988141 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269434525462 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802127329166 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893813429174 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160314512188 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627803071412 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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