Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades there has been a substantial rising in the number of cities. While some people believe that there are some aspects of city life are making life more difficult for those who live there, I argue with those who consider that the life is becoming easier, even in large metropolis.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages to take into consideration when living in big cities. Firstly, the cost of living is usually much high in cities, compared with rural areas, from house prices to transportation. Therefore, not everyone are able to enjoy good living conditions, especially for those on low incomes and students who sometimes suffer from genuine hardship and are barely able to make ends meet. More importantly, environmental pollution is the main difficulty. As there is a great deal of residents who use their cars to commute to work, to take children to school or simply get around, the amount of exhaust fumes is fairly high. As a result, there is a deterioration in the air quality, leading to some illnesses associated with respiratory problems.
On the other hand, it seems to me that the benefits outweigh its drawbacks. one reason is that urban citizens have opportunities to access high-quality education in university as well as pursuing a successful career with high salary and job prospects. recent graduates, for instance, who have attended a university in a big city are unlikely to find work suited to their qualifications in the countryside, whereas the big companies are to be found in the cities. Another key factor is the wealth of leisure activities on offer in metropolis. The cinema, music concerts and sports centre all attract customers, especially young people.
In conclusion, I believe that despite some negative sides, life in big cities is getting easier and pleasanter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06953642384 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90052049912 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4565895901 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220342791261 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637697443718 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854803243969 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160198575729 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927749534429 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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