6. It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?
In many regions of the world, science subjects have not been the top-priority of students to choose to study. there are some reasons behind this phenomenon which have a significant impact on community as a whole.
there are some main causes leading to this trend. Firstly, this domain is widely perceived as demanding in terms of both workload and intellectual content. As a result, it is understandable that some science subjects such as math, biology, chemistry or physic tend to be a huge challenge for students. Secondly, in terms of education, parents are less likely to teach their offspring the importance of science on their lives as well as encourage them to consider learning these subjects is instrumental in pursing a successful career in the future. Moreover, teaching strategies of schools nowadays have become to be out-dated. Pupils usually acquire their lessons from boring textbooks rather than having opportunities for practicing in laboratory or reality, so they do not have interests with this field.
this problem has some detrimental effects to the general public. The first issue is the lack of high-quality workforce that some branches of studies require for research and developmental purposes. Consequently, this will affect national economic expansion, essential for rising living standards. In addition, this trend is associated with the imbalance in the economy which is resulted from the explosion of students who choose to take arts and humanities subjects instead of learning science. it attributes to exacerbate the unemployment problem, leading to some social issues such as rising in criminal rate.
In conclusion, some causes are identified, this tendency could impact negatively on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46096654275 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95779986412 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0143229882 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140113344181 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489211517855 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052920784859 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855374799631 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340442584721 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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