International travel has many advantages to both the travellers and the country visited.
Do you advantages outweigh of disadvantages.
It is true that citizens around the world tend to show fancy for travelling overseas countries. From my perspective journey's to foreign bring more benefits than drawbacks.
To commence with, several problems rise along with. The first and formost is that, native make huge profits from foreign passengers because they really need for accomodation to stay over there and food is also expensive but they buy it to satisfy their needs. Second reason is that, environmental issue is also effects by migrators when they go on any historical buildings or places where they buy many eatable things. After, eat it they throw these plastic bags here and there it creates environmental problems as well as it impacts on other people's mind.
On the other hand, there are various merits, migrators to commute other countries due to this economy will be increased when passengers pay fee for their tickets as well as rent on their hotel where they staying for three to four days. Not only they gain knowledge about historical buildings where they visit but also gain experience of travelling.
Furthermore, passengers learn communication skills as well as culture or tradition from other nations and adopt it in their life. Last but not the least, they get a job opportunities and make a money for their future life.
Hence, agglomerating above discussed views it can be stated that, I personally believe that international tourism denotes positive trend for both individuals and on locality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
..., they get a job opportunities and make a money for their future life. Hence, agglo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, so, well, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13991769547 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70851930352 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8277018607 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.545454545 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0514353197949 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195460928571 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026370773951 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320942204779 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234374888518 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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