The Internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities or people to learn all over the world.
Is all information reliable on the Internet?
What could be done to control information online?
In the era of technology, the Internet is getting more popular for people all around the world. It is believed to help people enhance knowledge from different countries. However, the information is not entirely reliable. The essay will discuss about this problem and the solutions that citizen and government should do to control the online data.
Although the Internet may be a great browser to search information, it is unsafe for people if they totally believe in all online material because any report on the Internet can be falsified. People can easily upload a random data on the Internet by just one click without controlling. Some people even use the Internet as a tool so that they can spread malicious information with severe purposes such as: defaming the rival, agitating the riot, etc. During COVID 19 pandemic, for example, the number of posts on Facebook from many accounts delivered fake news related to epidemic situation could not be statistically, which made citizen fall into the panic.
Hence, online material should be controlled tightly in many ways. Firstly, people need to become smart readers knowing whether the information should be absorbed or eliminated in order to protect themselves from fake news. In the period of pandemic, government official news sites are always the most reliable sources that citizen can trust. Secondly, the government should tighter the network security by providing sanctions for the acts of spreading fake news.
To sum up, each of the information on the Internet can be faked with bad intentions so that people should be alert to fake news and government need to give more rule to reduce the propaganda of erroneous information.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13768115942 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6694318524 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3249971375 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295327463006 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101187703477 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686615509515 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184801335795 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494934073949 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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