In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or to use animal products, for example clothing and medicines.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people believe that animals are not essential anymore in demand for food and production. Honestly, I disagree with this statement because people are still in great demand for animals in many fields, particularly in food and pharmaceutical manufacturing. However, the advance in science today can help reduce human uses of animals in the clothing industry.
On the one hand, it can not be denied that animals play a crucial role in different areas of human life, especially in the production of food and medicines. Firstly, human demand for food produced from animals such as meat or fish has shown no sign of reduction in the past decade because animals are believed to be a nutritious source when they provide proteins and nutrients for human growth. If animals are not used as food, all humans must practice vegetarianism and veganism for the nourishment and this is simply impossible. Moreover, some animals can be the suitable subjects in the research of manufacturing medicines. After thousands of research in the field of zoology, scientists realized that there are various biological similarities between animals and humans, which is an important factor in pharmaceutical preparation. Therefore, testing the effectiveness and safety of newly-discovered cure or medicines on animals is necessary because it would be impractical and unethical if scientists carry out the experiments on humans.
On the other hand, using animals in producing fashion products such as clothes, hats and bags is considered as an unethical activity and was banned by the law for a long time, while there are still many illegal hunting activities to serve the needs of human clothing. However, thanks to the advantages of innovation and the discovery of artificial materials like artificial leather in the clothing industry, the use of animals such as fur and skin in manufacturing clothes and bags has decreased in recent years.
In conclusion, animals are still in great demand for humans in producing food and curing health problems. Nevertheless, human uses of animals can be altered by other artificial materials thanks to the innovation of science, especially in the clothing industry.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, honestly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32853025937 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03542084411 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518731988473 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7911972986 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.230769231 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321345081606 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128534762188 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382551832429 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213770156881 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294681774736 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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