Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What problems do this cause? What solutions needed related to the issue?
The improvement of internet system has changed the way of people to share and consume the information. However, this issue causes serious problems such as the invalid information shared by users and dangerous sites among children. Considering the problems, the firm punishment for fake information buzzers and the education regarding dangerous sites among children should be conducted.
The increase of fake information shared among users is one of the problems. As the users can access the internet easily, they will attempt to manipulate the information by giving unproven facts. As the result, other citizens will believe easily on the information without considering the validity. In addition, the way to access dangerous sites such as pornography will affect children. Children will pretend to be adults to access the pornographic contents in internet, and there is no controller of this children’s issue.
To solve these problems, there should be more actions. To reduce the invalid information among citizens, government should give hard punishment for everyone who try to manipulate the information. This punishment will make civilians think twice to share any information, and they will find the truth of the issues before spreading them to internet users. Moreover, the education about the danger of pornography also should be done by parents and teachers. By this education, minors will realize that pornography give more harms than the benefits in their future life.
To recapitulate, the information shared and consumed by people in internet cause serious problems in society such as the increase of fake news and the access of dangerous sites among children. Eventually, the firm punishment given by government for every fake information buzzers and the education among children regarding dangerous sites will be effective solutions to protect all aspect of society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52068965517 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91280538248 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3300825136 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162790948166 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656178545413 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570522176089 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118426660497 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394987928087 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.