There is an opinion that the advent of the Internet might be the most crucial breakthrough in information and technology for the last three decades. Thus, human lifestyle might be absoluetly different if we do not utilise it. I am personally in favour of this statement due to some reasons.
There are several remarkable issues why the development of the Internet network is crucial the most among various improvements in this society. First and foremost, the way of communication between people can be much more efficient because the advanced technology and IT can allow us to interact with others by providing a rapid speed of connection services. For example, many people across the world mingle with a variety of people from overseas via some free online-based chatting services like Skype and Instagram without the limitation of time and space.
Furthermore, the usage of online services exerts a favourable influence on educational revolution for the youth. It means that many students and other generations gain a huge chance to access diverse information and academic knowledge through many websites, which generally give plenty of useful lessons or instructions for free. Therefore, everyone tends to obtain an equal educational opportunity as well as improve their self-developments regarding knowledge or common senses.
Lastly, the general public has considerable advantages of using the Internet programmes associated with shopping and banking. This is because, with the online payment allowance, consumers are able to enjoy shopping and conduct their daily tasks readily at a comfortable home, not visiting the physical places. In this context, many of them are likely to save their time for other vital duties practically, and as a result, they are generally satisfied with their lives more compared to the past.
In conclusion, I completely, agree that the invention of the Internet has led to unprecedented consequences in our lives in positive ways because a more practicable conversation, better educational opportunities and performing daily tasks usefully at home are availiable regardless of time and space.
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- In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (eg. languages) and boys choose science subjects (eg. Physics). What do you think are the reasons? Do you think that this tendency should be changed? 78
- Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say that amount of time children they spend watching tv influences their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The given first pie chart gives information about typical Australian household energy usages while the second pie chart presents the rate of greenhouse gas emissions caused by Australian household, which lead to environmental problems. 84
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range of the years 1990 and 2010. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ledge or common senses. Lastly, the general public has considerable advantages of using th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47129909366 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06760950776 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0745010177 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.307692308 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124506218048 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422140084347 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336386981396 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695898234803 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302415102543 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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