It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Nowadays, finding a suitable place for bringing up children that is an urgent problem. The living condition might affect mental and physical development, which makes it hard to choose between an urban area and rural area. In spite of the advantages of a living condition in the city, I believe that it is a great idea to nurture children in the country.
First of all, I think the significant advantage of children living in a safe and clean environment and enjoying the fresh air of the countryside. If they live in a polluted environment such as air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution which causes a lot of respiratory and digestive system’s diseases. children’s body has a weaker immune system than adult’s, so they easily catch diseases. For instance, drinking polluted water makes children easily get a diarrhea disease. Furthermore, children living in rural area are easy to make friends with neighbors. there are many co-operative games that they can play together. Therefore, they could develop their creative and interactive brain. For example, when I was young, I used to play hide and seek with my friends, which helps me make friends easily with others. In contrast, children living in the city only play video games by themselves, so they are in lack of communication skill.
However, there are some drawbacks of living in the country because of lack of high qualified education system and high standard health care service. those children living in the city have various class options more than those living in the country.
In summary, this is strongly personal and depends on certain circumstances. it seems to me that bringing up children in the rural area is easier and safer than in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, in summary, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09407665505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84475089521 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5383340042 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124863689526 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045620639497 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435640196895 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820385999242 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290989150958 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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