It is difficult for people do exercise in city. Give the reasons and effects
In modern society, it is quite challenging for city dwellers to do exercise. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this phenomenon and demonstrate the possible effects of this issue.
From my perspective, a thickness of timetable is the main factor that leads to this situation. Unlike the rural area, people in the city must take their children to go to school every morning because the rate of population in the city is more than the countryside so it is hard to allow children go to school alone. In addition, they may be lost or kidnapped by strangers. After leaving children at school, parents start to work from 8 o’ clock to 5 o’ clock. Additionally, some companies require employees to work overtime to accelerate productivity to make the business’s profits. As a result, they feel exhausted when getting back home. And they do not want to do anything but sleep.
The potential effects of this issue contain physical and mental health. First of all, people lazy to workout can deal with obesity. Obesity is an illness which contributes to deadly disease such as heart attack, diabetes, cholesterol in the blood. Secondly, the fewer exercise people do, the more their mentality they suffer. This facilitates them have a pessimistic aspect and behavior to surrounding people. For example, people who attend exercise tend to express optimistic performance and feature than people who do not take participate in activities.
To conclude that, the source of difficulty to do exercise for the inhabited person in the city is that the busy schedule. It triggers the bodily and psychological state to endure a bad result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08455882353 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85346938333 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5014069883 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3529411765 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243366885916 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665433189039 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767149645374 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14769281034 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658434412849 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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