It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is true that some people have different talent than others. While others argue that talent can be acquired from birth, I believe that it is best that people with potential talent should undergo a guidance. Both of these arguments will be evaluated in this essay.
On the one hand, some people are born with innate talent. This talent maybe originated from one of the genes of the parents. For example, in a scientific study in the USA, it is proven that the probability of parents passing their talent to their off-spring is relatively high. The father who has strong vocal cords can possibly pass this structure to his child. This can result in a generation of singers in the family. This makes it clear that even without supervision from a professional trainor, a child can possess inherited talent.
On the other hand, most people acquired their talent through training and mentoring. Talents nurtured by consistent training and constant guidance can lead to a successful skill development. For instance, not all basketball players come from a family of sports person. In a survey made in the UK, it found that 80% of the highest paid players had done rigorous training. This makes it true that training encourage and empower the players to become more discipline and focus their minds into the development of their skills. If this skills are not develop, the talent will go to a waste.
In conclusion, although some people have gifted talent, I believe that the most effective way to enhance and develop one’s skill is through rigid training. It is predicted that more people will be encouraged to mold their skills through coaching in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nto the development of their skills. If this skills are not develop, the talent will...
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Suggestion: developed
...of their skills. If this skills are not develop, the talent will go to a waste. In c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248387096774 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.158064516129 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0741935483871 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0258064516129 0.0501214627716 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0516129032258 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151612903226 0.122226691241 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0387096774194 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53400774932 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225806451613 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11935483871 0.0861772015684 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0290322580645 0.021408717616 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00322580645161 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1664.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92170818505 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373665480427 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26334519573 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163701067616 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106761565836 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53400774932 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.6331119839 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5294117647 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5628008285 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 42.8639313377 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.86301369863 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266855264425 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113664882221 0.102741220458 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798366971478 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505680946373 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160851850843 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106753342099 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619599601449 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350437695318 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0539289801598 0.0638462369009 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194669166949 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386872668549 0.058150111329 67% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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