: it is a good thing for people in senior manager positions to get a higher salary than other workers in a same company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The fairness of worker’s income in an association is a major concern in our modern society. although many people may be skeptical about higher wage of senior managers I believe that it is a fair practice for all employees working in same organization.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons supporting adverse sides of paying higher salary for some particular positions. First and foremost, people argue that the difference in the employee’s earnings might create a huge gap between seniors and juniors. This might act as catalyst for a hostile attitude among seniors emerging in junior workers. Second, low earning may be inadequate for workers to afford their basis demands. In fact, there are a large number of workers have to work extra hours in order to feed their family. This is a primary culprit of depression and distraction of workers for their main jobs.
On other hand, I advocate the decision of many associations that is paying higher salary for management positions. The pivotal reason for that is it seems a fair practice when these people have spent a long time with firm determination and hard work to achieve reservoir of knowledge and hand-on experience are critical for them to reap the fruition in the future. Moreover, they deserve high salary which parallels their contribution to the organization. For example, a senior manager who has deeply understood about market and target customers might come up with innovative commercial strategies to help company maximize profits.
In conclusion, while salary policy which is paying more for some management positions might have some negative impacts, I firmly believe that these positions need to be paid higher due to a number of reasons such as their contribution for company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Although
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13148788927 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81425302962 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6615937407 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2496110841 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880516326871 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521303515305 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158799006854 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00762101341175 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.