It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication.
Do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, contamination of the environment and global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether climate change and the environment is a controversial subject for study or not?”. it is a widely held view that preserving natural ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that climate changes play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that global warming has a significant influence on climate change. Secondly, it can be argued that the green gases that emitted from the industrial factories might be the other factor in changing the weather and lead to the destruction of the ozone layer. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the toxic gases that spread from the defective vehicle contribute to the ecosystem as well as by increasing the temperature the sea level will be increased by melting ice caps.
However, there is no doubt that some informed decision must be taken to address the negative aspects of climate changes. various programs must be held to raise public awareness in order to preserve their natural ecosystem. moreover, it is quite clear that using the renewable source of energy, such as solar or electronic fuels might help to reduce the climate changes.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that rational decision must be taken into consideration to improve the climate changes. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and
individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vironment and global warming has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Suggestion: It
...ntroversial subject for study or not?”. it is a widely held view that preserving n...
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Suggestion: Various
...he negative aspects of climate changes. various programs must be held to raise public a...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...er to preserve their natural ecosystem. moreover, it is quite clear that using the renew...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13310580205 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86372325857 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4761503252 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645768680193 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225900306171 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334532432046 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0291738496566 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330189061856 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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