The question of whether it is important for parents to educate their children the distinction between good and wrong while they are young has long been debated. Personally, I absolutely agree with your idea, which may be used to propose some acceptable consequences for this case.
To begin, children exhibit remarkable flexibility and learn from others through gestures, behaviors, and emotions. So, training kids at a young age is the ideal way to instill healthy habits in them. For example, in terms of personal characteristics, parents can encourage their children to obey their relatives or elders. This can impress them and make them understand how important it is a courteous behaviour in daily life. Furthermore, children must learn how to apologize when they make a mistake or say something unpleasant. It enables students to recognize and consider themselves while also becoming more mature to address other dilemmas in a knowledge-based culture plagued with frightening cases.
And I am a firm believer in punishing those who commit wrongdoing but avoiding harming them. Because, in this scenario, there is a scarcity of altruistic behaviors, we can not only withstand home pressure, but they will also become pessimistic and more reclusive. In my opinion, instead of employing violence or cursing violently,I propose several remedies based on moral deterrence and personal accountability. For example, limiting the amount of money that children spend on computer games, which can lead to a sedentary lifestyle, or requiring them to undertake home chores on a daily basis to practice patience.
In conclusion, I continue to strongly support this viewpoint, and I am confident that by implementing the aforementioned principles and punishments, children will become more mature and productive members of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether it is important for parents to educate ...
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Suggestion: , I
... employing violence or cursing violently,I propose several remedies based on moral...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on a daily basis to practice patience. In conclusion, I continue to strongly su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45583038869 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10222799 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639575971731 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0692876799 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22885010391 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708321885354 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03630409349 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124701077386 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527529798812 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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