The issue as to whether natural process is a major for creatures to become extinct has remained a source of controversy. While it is being resisted that this catastrophic doesn't be responsible to prevent this from happening, I hold fast to the belief that human is the top reason for this disaster. I will support my argument in this essay below.
It is true that million of years ago, many ancient species of animals, such as dinosaurs, were wiped out due to a gradual shift in climate and changing sea levels, according to theories given by scientists and preservationists.However, these factors are just the primary contributor to extinctive problem. Today's ever-changing world, the appearance of industrial and agricultural activities lead to a huge amount of pollutants, cutting down a lot of trees cause loss of species's habitat and polluting wild animals' natural environment.Furthermore, the increased demand for goods made from animal's products , such as skins and horns, also leads to illegall rampant huntings of wild and drives forces behind such a tragedy with endangered species, rhinos for an instance. For these underlying reasons, Humans are held accountable and should do what is needed to rectify the situation.
Other justifications for saving wild animals involve significant roles that they play in not only the balance of ecosystem or the diversity of biodiversity but also our lives. It is undeniable fact that natural species associated with human beings as strong as possible.So if one species becomes extinct, many other animals and even plants will suffer as a food chain is disrupted. Wild animals have a greater aesthetic and socio-cultural values. They contribute to our biodiversity that makes a better planet. In numerous places around the world, many types of animals play an important role in different cultures. For example, Vietnamess is very respectful for buffaloes and worshiped as a mascot.
The disappearance of species are not always caused by natural phenomenons but as a consequence of our doings. It is imperative to put appropriate protection measures to help preserve wild animals because their extinction will be a huge question for the survival of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25324476569 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.550462764 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.785714286 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25366292027 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780387036038 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506178011932 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149761306358 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493420793404 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.