In today's highly industrialize tendency, the development of every nation is associated with the responsibility of environmental preservation. And the issue as to whether those protections belongs to multination organization rather than by each country that has remained source of controversy. And i hold fast to the belief that it is both of them,I write up some arguments to tackle this situation.
On the one hand, Environmental problems directly affect people's well-being on another country, so cross-border organization also plays an important role in contributing the survival of environment. The appearance of whom make a good way to raise awareness of the need to dispose of large amount of serious problems related to environmental issues. For example, By giving rise to the spread of news on online platforms or international newspaper, human being can easily approach the ever-changing propensity and timely solve those impacts the best suitable.
On the other hand, Each country should take responsibility for natural habitat by several ways. Each government have to enact most stringent environmental regulations, maybe paying fine's taxes, even imprisonment. Furthermore, the rise of industrial and agricultural activities and the abuse of fertilizers and pesticides cause a huge amount of pollutants lead to environmental pollution, so encourage all nation's residents is also very necessary.
In conclusion, although environmental protection needs to be the responsibility of each individual nation, there should also be one transnational organisation that educates and monitors environmental concerns. There are many countries in one planet, so there needs to be cooperation in order for a healthy and sustainable future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71042471042 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4817050552 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6296626736 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.454545455 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1765983569 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672018883064 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671504319429 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108712456213 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498175938405 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.